Wednesday, May 28, 2008
FTKMF: Post 7. B.
FTKMF: Post 7. A.
Tuesday, May 20, 2008
FTKMF: Post 6. B.
FTKMF: Post 6. A.
Monday, May 12, 2008
FTKMF: Post 5. B.
FTKMF: Post 5. A.
Tuesday, May 6, 2008
FTKMF: Post 4. B.
As I have just finished the fourth section of your novel I have begun to feel an extreme sense of anger that you have to towards the new communist government expecially with the new murder of your father. “By the third day, we all know that what we feared most happened. Keav, and now Pa, one by one, the my family.” (107) With this anger you made many silent threats against Pol Pot, the new head of government. “I am going to kill Pol Pot. I hate him and I want to make sure he dies a slow and painful death.” “Don’t say such a thing or you will get hurt.” “I am going to kill him”(108) You also begin to describe his nature. “I will kill Pol Pot, I don’t know him, yet I am certain he is the fattest, slimiest snake on earth.”(108) Throughout this novel it seems as if you are going through an emotional battle also. “Sadness makes me want to die inside. Sadness makes me want to kill myself to escape the hopelessness of my life. Rage makes me want to survive and live so that I may kil. I feed my rage with bloody images of Pol Pot’s slain body being dragged in the dirt.” (108) In the end of the section, you also showed anger against another subject, the gods of the Buddhist religion.“Gods, this cannot happen to me again! If you let my brother die, I will never forgive you. You can just go to hell- for I know there are no gods in the world now,” (114)
I look forward to reading more,
Caitie
FTKMF: Post 4. A.
Tuesday, April 22, 2008
FTKMF: Post 3. A.
FTKMF: Post 3. B.
I am very much enjoying your novel, First They Killed My Father. As I am reading your book, I get a sense of unimaginable cruelty and desperation. In this last section that I just read, You have been leaving at various work camps, suffering the constant decreasing food rations, and have started to increasingly fear the safety of your family from your wealthy past. As you describe the impoverished communities, the selfish new government, and the horrifyingly disease prone persons, I have begun to truly feel the pain all of captive Cambodians most have felt. “Many of the villagers are getting sicker and sicker from the disease and starvation. They lie in their huts, whole families together, unable to move. Concave faces have the appearance of what they will look like once the flesh rots way.”(84) As you described the diminishing health status of the villagers around you, I thought that your next quote was very interesting. “They lie there, as if no longer of this world, so weak they cannot swat away the flies sitting on their faces. Occasionally, parts of their body convulse involuntarily and you know they are alive. However, there is nothing we can do but let them lie there until they die… My family does not look very different from them.”(84) This quote shows how hopeless, you felt or doomed and depressed your environment was. At the end of the section I just read you dropped the bomb that your sister had just died in a teenage work camp after being separated from your family. Considering that you could not cry or show emotion, or else you would be killer, I thought that most have been very hard for you. I wonder what will happen, as more and more father are being murdered around your village.
Sincerely,
Caitie
Sunday, April 20, 2008
Sources
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"Abduction of Innocents" from Essence Communications(accessed from SIRS)
http://sks.sirs.com/cgi-bin/hst-article-display?id=SMN0307H-0-4689&artno=0000214510&type=ART&shfilter=U&key=&title=Abduction%20of%20Innocents&res=Y&ren=Y&gov=Y&lnk=N&ic=Y
"Uganda: The Horror" from Smithsonian Magazine(accessed from SIRS)
http://sks.sirs.com/cgi-bin/hst-article-display?id=SMN0307H-0-4689&artno=0000211659&type=ART&shfilter=U&key=The%20Lord%27s%20Resistance%20Army&title=Uganda%3A%20The%20Horror&res=Y&ren=Y&gov=Y&lnk=N&ic=Y
"UGANDAN CHILDREN ABDUCTED TO PERFORM ACTS OF WAR" from USA TODAY(accessed from SIRS)
http://sks.sirs.com/cgi-bin/hst-article-display?id=SMN0307H-0-4689&artno=0000110301&type=ART&shfilter=U&key=The%20Lord%27s%20Resistance%20Army&title=Ugandan%20Children%20Abducted%20to%20Perform%20Acts%20of%20War&res=Y&ren=Y&gov=Y&lnk=N&ic=Y
"The Lord's Resistance Army (LRA)" from Global Security (Non-database)
http://www.globalsecurity.org/military/world/para/lra.htm
"Uganda" from CIA factbook (Non-database)
https://www.cia.gov/library/publications/the-world-factbook/geos/ug.html
""Interview With LRA Spokesman" Black Star News (Interview)
http://blackstarnews.com/?c=122&a=4457
"Intense Grief and Fear in Northern Uganda " Doctors without Borders (non-database)
www.doctorswithoutborders.org/.../top10.html
Tuesday, April 15, 2008
FTKMF: Post 2. B.
FTKMF: Post 2. A.
Tuesday, April 8, 2008
FTKMYF: Explanation
Sunday, March 30, 2008
FTKMF: Post 1. A.
FTKMF: Post 1. B.
Tuesday, March 25, 2008
Middlesex: #7: A
Sultan(159)- a king or sovereign especially of a Muslim state
Pecuniary(159)- consisting of or measured in money
::ANALYSIS::
“Or had guilt begun to infect him, too, so that to distract himself from the thing he’d done he ended up with these Mabels and Lucies and Doloreses?”(159) This is an example of a metaphor because it comes his nude models to that of Mabels and Lucies and Doloreses.
“It’s hard to express the excitement such phrases instilled in a kid like me from the cultural sticks. “(454) Cal here uses a simile to compare his childhood to that of being raised in the “cultural sticks”
“Not long after the Prophet’s disappearance, my grandmother underwent a fairly novel medical procedure.”(165) This is an example of a metaphor because the author uses the term “a fairly novel medical procedure”, to describe getting her body to never have babies ever again.
::QUOTE::
“Why you leave your wife and child? What’s the matter with you?” “My only responsibility is to my people.”(164) I thought that this quote was interesting in that Desdemona is finally standing up for her cousin and how poorly her ex-relative treated her family. It was very shocking when the “Fard” left his daughter and wife to live as a messenger of god.
Middlesex: #7: B
Tuesday, March 18, 2008
Middlesex: #6: A
Cassava(150) any of several American plants (genus Manihot, especially M. esculenta) of the spurge family grown in the tropics for their edible tuberous roots which yield a nutritious starch;
Swine(150) any of various stout-bodied short-legged omnivorous artiodactyl mammals (family Suidae) with a thick bristly skin and a long flexible snout; especially : a domesticated one descended from the wild boar
::ANALYSIS::
“The Prophet himself remained veiled to Desdemona. Fard was like a god: present everywhere and visible nowhere.”(150) This is an example of figurative language because it uses a simile. The author uses like to compare Fard to a god.
“The fezzes, the prayer rugs, the crescent moons: it was a little like going home.”(149) This is another example of a simile with the comparasion using like.
“For the residents of Black Bottom it was like traveling to another planet.”(149) This is a final comparation with a simile, all the while showing the similarities between the residents and their customs.
::QUOTE::
“What was happening to Desdemona? Was she, always so receptive to a deep priestly voice, coming under the influence of Fard’s disembodied one? Or was she just, after ten years in the city, finally become a Detroiter, meaning that she saw everything in terms of black and white?” (156) I found it interesting how the racism of the Detroiters was shown in the text. I do not believe that Desdemona is starting to become racist, but you never know in that kind of environment.
Middlesex: #6: B
Tuesday, March 11, 2008
Middlesex: #5: B
I am very much enjoying hearing about your character in Jeffrey Eugenides’ Middlesex. I am so far at the point when you are in the silk room and you start to hear a mysterious man speaking rudely over his mother and past. I feel bad for how much guilt and dishonesty you and Lefty have to carry around every day. I can not believe that your husband is making you get a job, but maybe you might enjoy that more then idling at home. I thought it was interesting how much went on in the silk room too. “The Silk Room: a description is in order. (So much happened in that fifteen-by-twenty-foot space: God spoke; my grandmother renounced her race; creation was explained; and that’s just for starters.)”(151) I am also very impressed by the way you show that you are not perfect. Unlike your cousin you very much deal with your faults, instead of shoving them into the closet. I do not know how you could have managed to keep Lefty faithful during his bartending days.
--Best wishes for your new job!--
Middlesex: #5: A
Camshaft (97) -a shaft to which a cam is fastened or of which a cam forms an integral part
Chassis (97)- the supporting frame of a structure (as an automobile or television)
::ANALYSIS::
“Just like ice, lives crack, too.”(125) This is an example of figurative language because the author uses like to compare the cracking ice to the shattering lives too.
“The Packard, as gracefully as an elephant standing on its front legs, flips up onto its grille.”(125) This is an example of figurative language because it uses as to compare a car’s motions to that of an elephant’s.
“Like a cleaning lady working in Grosse Pointe, she came and went by the back door”(149) This again another example of a simile, with the use of “like” to compare Desdemona’s actions to that of a cleaning lady.
::QUOTE::
“The Silk Room: a description is in order. (So much happened in that fifteen-by-twenty-foot space: God spoke; my grandmother renounced her race; creation was explained; and that’s just for starters.)”(151) I thought this quote was very interesting in that it should what really happened in Desdemona’s silk room. Before in the novel, the only showed the outline of the silk room stories.
Tuesday, March 4, 2008
Middlesex: #4: A
Ingots(96)- a mold in which metal is cast
Substrata(96)- an underlying support : foundation: as a: substance that is a permanent subject of qualities or phenomena
::ANALYSIS::
“It was like a grove of trees, as if the Rouge’s eight main smokestacks had sown seed to the wind, and now ten or twenty or fifty smaller trunks were sprouting up in the infertile soil around the plant.”(95) This is an example of figurative language because it is a simile while comparing the Rouge’s smokestacks to a grove of trees.
“This once-divided city reminds me of myself. My struggle for unification, for Einheit.”(106) This is an example of figurative language because it is a metaphor while comparing the speaker’s inner division to that of Berlin’s past.
“The Packard, as gracefully as an elephant standing on its front legs, flips up onto its grille.” (125) This is an example of figurative language because it is a simile while comparing the Packard’s flips to an elephant standing on its front legs.
::QUOTE::
“The simultaneous Fertilization had occurred in the early morning hours of March 24,1923, in separate, vertical bedrooms, after a night out at the theater.”(107) I found it interesting how to such a length the author would go to specify the process of which her father was conceived. To many this type of accuracy and details would seem unnecessary and awkward. How odd of a conversation would that be for a grandchild to ask her/his grandparent about the night of fertilization for her father?
Middlesex: #4: B
Dear Author,
I am increasingly drawn into your novel, Middlesex. At first I was having a hard time reading and getting into your piece but as I forced myself to read on, I became bound to it. I just finished reading about when Desdemona just gave birth to her child, and the speaker’s father. I thought this following quote was so shocking. “One out of every two thousand babies is born with ambiguous genitalia. In the United State, with a population of two hundred and seventy-five million, that comes to one hundred and thirty-seven thousand intersexuals alive today.” (106) I never though that I just America we had so many people born with ambiguous genitalia, I can not imagine the depression that someone would feel to find out that they were not who they thought they were. Another quote that I drew a liking to was when Lefty finds out that his sister and wife is pregnant. ‘“You liked the pageant?” “It’s not that.” “What is it?” Desdemona looked into her husband’s eyes. But it was Sourmelina who explained it all. “Your wife and I?” she said in plain English. “ We’re both knocked up.”(105) I would think that it would be very odd knowing that not only that you had intercourse with and married your brother, but also that from that intercourse came a child. I hope you later show how the whole situation went down when Desdemona and Lefty’s child found out that his parents were brother and sister.
Thanks much!
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Middlesex: #3: B
Middlesex: #3: A
Aphrodisiac (72)- an agent (as a food or drug) that arouses or is held to arouse sexual desire
Hypochondria (68)- extreme depression of mind or spirits often centered on imaginary physical ailments
::ANALYSIS::
“millinery girls as fan dancers”(68) This is an example of figurative language because it is a simile. The author shows the millinery girls similarities to that of fan dancers.
“Europe and Asia Minor were dead” (68) This is an example of personification, because it gives the areas, Europe and Asia Minor, the ability to die. This description showed how to Desdemona, her past (Europe and Asia Minor) were behind her.
“To my grandparents Detroit was like one big Koza Han during cocoon season.”(88)This example of figurative language showed how Lefty and Desdemona saw some aspects of their past in their future.
::QUOTE::
“According to Dr. Luce, the gene first appeared in my bloodline sometime around 1750, in the body of one Penelope Evangelatos, my great-grandmother to the ninth power.”(71) This quote from Middlesex shows the randomness of her/his disorder. I found it amazing that over those hundreds of years that only the speaker caught this genetic disorder.
Tuesday, February 19, 2008
Middlesex: #2: B
Middlesex: #2: A
Aquiline(47)- curving like an eagle's beak
Quay(47)- a structure built parallel to the bank of a waterway for use as a landing place
::Analysis::
“leap nimbly up onto a laundry line, and tightrope-walks across to the house behind.”(56) This is an example of personification because it is taking an object, fire, and giving it human characteristics. A fire cannot technically leap nimbly or tightrope.
“the ripples of light reflecting on his cabin walls were the pyrotechnics of heaven.”(44) This is an example of figurative language because it is a metaphor. It compared the reflected light to the god-like pyrotechnics of heaven.
“your legs were made of glass,”(44) This is figurative language for it is a comparison, without the use of “as” or “like”. The soldier compared his general’s legs to glass and their similarities.
::Quote::
“The smell of things burning that aren’t meant to burn wafts across the city: shoe polish, rat poison… And hair and skin.”(57) This quotation from Middlesex illustrates the pain and suffering with occurred at the port. After fleeing their respective towns, the refugees were plied up and captured in a burning barricaded city. The suffering was tremendous and as the couple/family fled from the city they smelt it tragedy.
Friday, February 15, 2008
Middlesex: #1: A
Heredity(3)- the sum of the characteristics and potentialities genetically derived from one's ancestors
Endocrinology(3)- a branch of medicine concerned with the structure, function, and disorders of the endocrine glands
::ANALYSIS::
“Began their slow collision into each other.”(11)This is an example of a metaphor because it shows a comparison of the act of forgiveness and reproduction to a collision. Because the couple had a fight earlier they gradually warmed up to each other as time pasted, similar to a slow crash.
“Only yesterday was Chapter Eleven finally allowed to dye his own eggs,” (15) The speaker is using a metaphor to compare an unidentified person as Chapter Eleven. This comparision shows that this person most not seem that important to the author or speaker or that in the past the two have not gotten along.
“her insides as a vast computer code, all 1s and 0s, an infinity of sequences, any one of which might contain a bug.” (37) This is a simile because it is using as to compare the grandma’s inside to a computer code. This comparison was used to illustrate how easily someone’s gene’s genes (1s and 0s) can get mixed.
::QUOTE::
“Our religion’s adherence to the Julian calendar has once again left us out of sync with the neighborhood.”(15) This is an important quote relating to the novel, Middlesex, because it shows the speaker’s mood and relationship to the outside world. The main character obviously feels isolated and distant from her neighborhood and society because of her religious beliefs. This may show a future change in beliefs as she grows older and has more control over her own life.
Middlesex: #1: B
Sunday, February 3, 2008
"Like A Boy"
Penelope’s resilience in her marriage was incredible. Every man in this queen’s country was constantly trying to court her. Her suitors were constantly at her home and destroying the property. “down to the last man the court my mother, they lay waste my house! And mother… she neither rejects a marriage she despises nor can she bear to bring the courting to an end-“(Book 1, 288-2991)The bachelors were desperate and resilient but once again Penelope proved her love for her husband but still kept her suitors around. “She fell to weeping for Odysseus… But the suitors broke into… prayers to lie beside her, share her bed,” (Book 1, 418-421) While she wept longing for Odysseus, her husband was with Calypso. For seven years he stayed on her island, while taking advantage of his loving wife. “In the nights, true, he’d sleep with her in the arching cave-“(Book 5, 170-171) Penelope is an amazing character in that she never gave up on someone, while in the same situation others would lose faith.
“Like a Boy” by Ciara, is from a viewpoint of a lover with a disloyal and absent partner. In many ways this song reminded me of Penelope. One is how both the singer and Penelope are both faithful and devoted to an adulterous man, while both being limited by society and its expectations. “What if I?/Had a thing on the side?/Made ya cry?/Would the rules change up?/Or would they still apply?/If I played you like a toy?/Sometimes I wish I could act like a boy” Another similarity between theses two speakers are also their absent lovers. “If I was always gone/With the sun get'n home/(Would Ya Like That?)/Told you I was with my crew/When I knew it wasn't true” Penelope saw that even if her husband was supposedly dead, she still was true. “Like a Boy” reminded me of Penelope because of both of their unfaithful and absent men.
Tuesday, January 8, 2008
Hero: Post B : #7
Hero: Post A : #7
---Vestibule(380) any of various bodily cavities
---Aegis(381) shield or breastplate emblematic of majesty that was associated with Zeus and Athena
ANALYSIS:
~~“I saw Dark Hero palm each of their heads like they were two coconuts and smash them together.”(381) This is an example of a metaphor because the author uses like or as while comparing heads to coconuts.
~~~“He whipped up Uberman’s cape, covering his head with fabric, and tried to steer him like he was riding a bull at the rodeo.”(395) This is also an example of a metaphor because the author uses like or as while comparing Golden Boy to a bull rider.
~~~“he plummeted toward the ground like he had at last found his purpose.”(396) This is also an finally another example of a metaphor because the author uses like or as while comparing Larry’s action to as if he had finally found himself.
QUOTE:
“I was fed up with waiting for people to tell me things, fed up with being scared of what might come next.”(373) This quote is important because it shows Thom realization that he cannot and should not be influenced by other’s actions and opinions. He also realizes that he is only afraid of what people tell him he should be afraid of, not of what he only thinks.